<p>Hello I just completed my SAP appeal letter that I'm planning to mail it as soon as possible. I just wanted to get some feedback on the overall structure of the essay and if I need any improvements or modifications. </p>
<p>Dear Appeal Board, </p>
<p>My name is ________ and I am writing a letter of appeal for my recent suspension of financial aid. The reason why I didnt meet the terms of the satisfactory academic progress last semester is due to my changing of major from ________ to Economics in the College of Liberal Arts and Sciences. I dropped two courses, ________ and __<strong><em>with the intention to focus more towards the prerequisites that will enable me to transfer into the economics discipline by the Spring 2014 semester. I reasoned with myself to make this ultimate decision because I am currently in the _</em></strong>_ and I would have to apply for an inter-college transfer. The possibility of not being able to matriculate into my intended major scared me to believe that I was making an optimal decision. </p>
<p>Consequently, dropping the two courses left me with only 12 credit hours for the semester and instead of utilizing the abundance of opportunities to focus more on my remaining classes, I ultimately took it for granted by procrastinating. Furthermore, after receiving mediocre marks on my exams, I became very uncertain about the path that I chose in terms of my academic discipline and led me to have a lack of conviction towards my schoolwork. However this does not apply towards my aspirations after I graduate. I have dreams of having a career in consulting and entrepreneurship but like any feats of achievement in this world, I painstakingly realized that focusing on the end product does not prove effective in the long run (or the short run). This widely accepted principle took me a while to embrace due to my naivety. After a mediocre and frustrating two years in college, I finally realized what I was doing wrong. I set my goals in front of me but I never had the willpower to put forth my full potential while studying. It was until I realized the possibility of not being able to come back to the __________ next semester that willpower along with preparation is necessary to fuel any kind of achievement. A vital factor to help me get another chance to improve upon my mistakes is to receive financial aid and although I have been performing at mediocre standards, I promise to put forth my full potential by organizing my priorities and being proactive outside of the classroom. </p>
<p>My first priority is to perform well in my classes. Personally I plan to build the framework to my goal-oriented mindset by keeping a daily agenda that will organize the classes and meetings that I have to attend. I believe that constructing a list of objectives will enable me to develop a healthy habit while performing my daily activities. Among my objectives, I plan on dedicating 2-3 hours to reviewing and studying new material that I learned in class as well as prepare myself for future lessons throughout the week by reading over lesson plans. </p>
<p>In social aspects I plan on joining the Economics Club this following semester to network and engage in discussions with students who have similar academic interests as me. It is a new academic approach in comparison with my previous one because I never joined any clubs or organizations that pertained to my current major. Therefore I am looking forward to opening my mind to other brilliant students and leaders this campus organization has to offer. I am also very interested in the __________ academic internship program. This program offers the opportunity for me to pursue my interests in policy economics by allowing me to intern for academic credit while living in _________ for one semester. Stumbling upon this program made me realize that there are many opportunities that this university has to offer in helping students find their passion within their studies. The opportunity for me to learn in a fun and professional atmosphere has made me very eager to work hard towards that goal this following semester. </p>
<p>In conclusion I take full responsibility of my actions, or the lack of, during the past semester. I admit that I havent made a conscious effort to pursue my goals in college thus far. The false commitment I made towards myself made me realize that I have come short in several ways. And after realizing the pattern of my poor grades I have constructed a game plan to revitalize my career as a student at the ________. With a personal discipline and plans to engage in academic organizations, I have been reminded of my purpose as a student and as a future professional. I should have acted upon this earlier however taking this difficult route has been virtuous and revealing for my character. This year I intend to fully commit to my academics as well as make conscious efforts to garner interests from campus organizations. With financial aid I have the opportunity to devote myself to these promises in becoming an excellent student. </p>
<p>I consider myself blessed to be able to attend the ____________ and my experience has been nothing but extraordinary. I am an out-of-state student and being able to attend school in another state gives me the privilege to open up to new perspectives and opportunities. In addition to being given another chance, I believe I am ready to fully take on my responsibilities to immerse myself in this great learning environment. I will do everything in my power to not only meet the SAP requirements but to exceed them as I maintain grades that will reflect excellence in myself and in my course of study. In other words, I sincerely hope that I am given the chance to prove my words to be true. </p>
<p>I have included a document to prove my concentration towards the economics major. </p>
<p>Thank you for your time and consideration on this matter. </p>
<p>Sincerely,</p>