<p>Section 10:
12. Many changes occurred while she was president of [college, and they increased its educational quality as well as effectiveness].
I put D: college; these changes increased its educational quality and effectiveness.
Answer E: college; these changes increased both the educational quality and effectiveness of the college.
D and E say the same thing but to me D was more succinct whereas E seemed to drone on and on compared to D.</p>
<p>Be especially careful when you see “it” or “its” in the Writing section. If “it” does not have a clear antecedent or could have more than one antecedent, then “it” is not acceptable. E is worded longer but without any ambiguity.
Answer: E</p>