SAT essay help?

<p>I'm trying to improve my SAT essay. I got a 6 on my first try. I'm in AP english and I got a 4 on the exam. I'm not a brilliant writer, but I'm definitely not terrible either. Does anyone know of any specific books/articles that might help me improve? Also, would anyone has an essay that scored 11-12 be willing to share it?</p>

<p>bump…</p>

<p>My essay. I hope you can understand my handwriting.</p>

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<p>It’s an 11 btw.</p>

<p>I made a thread on this earlier… didn’t really work out like I wanted it to, but let me see if I can find a link.</p>

<p>there’s 4 here. Have fun. </p>

<p><a href=“http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-preparation/742202-sat-essay-compilation-thread.html[/url]”>http://talk.collegeconfidential.com/sat-preparation/742202-sat-essay-compilation-thread.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

<p>there’s post called How to Write a 12 Essay in Just 10 Days, you can check that out</p>

<p>and the major improvement for essay writing is FILL THE WHOLE PAPER NO MATTER WHAT (i can guarantee you a 9 or 10)</p>