<p>If you chose A, you would change flying to flew, therefore avoiding the run-on occurring after the comma, right?</p>
<p>lol its definitely A-- the question wasnt even a sentence</p>
<p>but if you chose A, then it would say wings Beating, ears tuned and something else ending in ‘ed’, which isnt parallel</p>
<p>Wouldn’t they be in the same tense, wings “beated” would make no sense.</p>
<p>wait i’m sooo confused now. was the owl question an identify the error or improving sentences?</p>
<p>wait what would be in the same tense? flew and beating tuned… or flying beat tuned</p>
<p>don’t really know, but if you make everything -ed, beating would become beated and that makes no sense.</p>
<p>past tense for beat is beat without ‘ed’</p>
<p>you would not have to change the tense of beating, it wasn’t being used as a verb, it was a participle</p>
<p>so “with ears tuned and wings beat”?</p>
<p>still is fishy.</p>
<p>Ari7, thats possible maybe i wasn’t really paying much attention, but i def. sure it had to be A or B… Anyone remember a qusetion in the last writing section about architecture and buildings, was the ans Never had we seen?</p>
<p>“Never having seen …, we were amazed at the large size and stature…”</p>
<p>heavily paraphrasing</p>
<p>@Jtran92: i picked “never having seen…”</p>
<p>Yep, I’m certain that never having seen was correct.</p>
<p>Reasoning: “We have never seen” or any of the choices like that meant to independent clauses which have to be separated by a semicolon or dash. A comma would result in a comma splice.</p>
<p>Yeah, I’m pretty sure it’s no error. A lot of people picked “need not” just because it doesn’t sound colloquial.</p>
<p>which question are you guys talking about? i remember there is one i corrected that “not seeing something before, we were amazed…”</p>
<p>So 4 no errors?</p>
<p>Truck/safety
Butterfly
Rhino
Children on cruise (was this experimental?)</p>
<p>Yeah, that Children one was experimental. I never got that.</p>
<p>Wait, can someone explain why the “Wendy” question had an error?</p>
<p>woahwaohwaoh which one was the butterfly one? i had an error for that one…</p>
<p>and which is the Wendy question?</p>