SAT tomorow!! score my essay out of 6 pls

<p>Hello guys, I am taking the SAT this Saturaday, and I am a little woried about the essay.
Can you grade this one please? </p>

<p>Assignement: What is the view of the claim that the opinion of the majority is alays right?</p>

<p>Most of the countries nowadays are democratic. They act according to williness of the majority. But the majority is not always right. Egyptian society and german society in the first half of the 20th century show us ho the majority is not always right.</p>

<p>Egypte has known a big revolution in the last three years. The majority was against Hosni Mubarak. And after nearly a year he resigned. This majority voted for Mohamed Morsi to be the new president. And as we see, a new revolution has started these days against him because he was not able to get Egypte out of the crisis caused by the revolution. Maybe if the egypcian citizens chosed another candidate there will not be such a problem.</p>

<p>Adolf Hitler, the famous german dictator and tyrant, profited from germans empathy to preoccupy the post of the president. But this man haven't served Germany at all. He was the main reason of the World War II. And Germany sustained a lot of dammage in this period and lost a huge fortune in this war, and nearly 2 millions of its citizens died. That means that germans have chosen the wrong person. If there was any other president instead of Hitler, World War II wouldn't have existed.</p>

<p>Egyptians were wrong to choose Morsi, Germans regretted choosing Hitler. The opinion of the majority is not always right because this majority isn't expert and isn't well informed about the truth of future project. Because authority always tries to get empathy of the citizens by false promises.</p>

<p>Bad essay, no grammer, lack of details and bad english, you need to view 12 grade essays</p>

<p>You dont have to introduce Hitler ("the famous german dictator "). Strip out all attempts at advanced vocabulary- they are costing you points rather than helping (“profited from germans empathy to preoccupy the post of the president”).</p>

<p>You need more <em>reasons</em>. What is it about these people that lead to the problems? Many people would say that the kind of egotist who would run for high office is the last type that should be given power. </p>

<p>You can also help yourself by making it longer. A third example would help.</p>