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<p>Although most people find rules and limitations to be annoying and mundane, rules and limitations contribute to many people's happiness as well. The joy and exuberance people experience from the lift of limitations and rules make them conscious of themselves and more aware of the events and things that create happiness in their lives.</p>
<p>In the book Nothing Stops, Earvin Smith is a typical teenage boy who parties and hangs out with his friends. At the expense of his fun, Earvin's grades slipped. Earvin took his life for granted and had no regard for the rules around him. Unfortunately, earvin's parents grounded him. After his grounding, Earvin became more aware of himself and of his life. His limitation allowed him to be more appreciative of his friends and cherish the time he had to spend time with them. Without this limitation, Earvin would continue living his life carelessly and never experience this true happiness.
Another character who shows limitations can contribute to happiness is Jenny, a character from the movie Forest Gump. Unlike her friend Forest who followed society's rules and guidelines, Jenny was more of a party girl who experimented with drugs and alcohol.Throughoutt herignominiouss life, Jenny felt she was happy with herself and the druggies around her. However as she really took the time to reflect, Jenny wasdistraughtt at how she never had anyaccomplishmentss and decided tochangee her ways. Evantually Jenny settled down with Forest and raise a child. Despite the limitations of being a house wife, Jenny felt she was truly happy and accomplished. Her life of drugs may have brought a sense of happiness but it was nothing compared to the joy of raising a boy and watching him grow. Like Earvin Smith, Jenny became more aware of herself and of her life. She discovered that limits and rules do in fact bring a complete sense of happiness.
Rules and limitations are often associated with images of boredom and sadness. However, these rules and limitations also opened new paths to happiness. In addition, rules and limitations made individual more conscious and aware of themselves. With this keener insight, individuals are betterequippedd to trulyexperiencee overall happiness. Earvin Smith and Jenny are both examples of people who experienced a greater sense of happiness through experiencing a limitation.</p>
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