Scholarship Essay Help

Hi everyone, I am looking for someone to revise my essay for a scholarship I’m applying for. I don’t want to post it publicly because of plagiarism and all that so I was hoping someone on here would help me with the essay through PM’s. I have completed the essay but will like a second opinion before submitting it.

The prompt is as follows: Tell a story from your life, describing an experience that either demonstrates your character or helped to shape it.

Thank you all and hope to hear from someone soon! (please I’m despreate)

Hi, so you have already revised it and want someone to review it?

You can PM me and paste it in the box and I can read it over if you want.