<p>Even after the Civil War, the emergence of Jim Crow laws and “separate by equal” polices kept African Americans living in poverty and second-class conditions.</p>
<p>You mean “separate but equal”</p>
<p>Even after the Civil War, the emergence of Jim Crow laws and “separate by equal” polices kept African Americans living in poverty and (in) second-class conditions.</p>
<p>Furthermore, women had no right to hold public office, and they were considered to be nothing more then (than) property</p>
<p>The fight for equality for women plainly shows that established traditions are often degrading and wrong, and that they must be fought against.</p>
<p>I don’t think you should have put “that they must be fought against” instead you could have ended it, " Therefore, the fight for equality for women plainly shows that established traditions are often degrading and wrong"</p>
<p>Score:6</p>