Score/critique my essay please?

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<p>Definitely a 5 at least!
I would give it a 6.</p>

<p>Your first example is great, but your second paragraph, deviates a bit from your topic sentence.</p>

<p>You write about the women’s suffrage movement, but you then talk about how women aren’t on the same level as men for other stuff (i.e. holding office). I think your topic sentence should just generally state that women weren’t treated as equals to men. </p>

<p>I would also suggest adding a third paragraph, possibly a personal anecdote or from a story. </p>

<p>Great work!</p>

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