<p>Please score/critique/revise my essay. I need any help or suggestions I can get. If you search my previous threads, you could find 2 other essay i wrote. Here is my third:</p>
<p>Prompt:</p>
<p>Think carefully about the issue presented in the following excerpt and the assignment below.</p>
<p>Given the importance of human creativity, one would think it should have a high priority among our concerns. But if we look at the reality, we see a different picture. Basic scientific research is minimized in favor of immediate practical applications. The arts are increasingly seen as dispensable luxuries. Yet as competition heats up around the globe, exactly the opposite strategy is needed.</p>
<p>Adapted from Mihaly Csikszentmihalyi, Creativity: Flow and the Psychology of Discovery and Invention </p>
<p>Is creativity needed more than ever in the world today? Plan and write an essay in which you develop your point of view on this issue. Support your position with reasoning and examples taken from your reading, studies, experience, or observations.</p>
<p>Essay:</p>
<p>An artist draws with creativity and a scientist approaches a problem with flexibility. Everything in this world needs creativity in order to reach its potential. A thrilling novel without a twisted ending is not a thrilling novel. A scientist focusing too much on a specific area will never think outside the bubble. The world today needs creativity for a vibrant, innotative world. </p>
<p>The Great Gatsby shows this creative aspect. In the book, Nick is set in an American society. He embarks on a sort of adventure with deceit, revenge, love, posperity, and hate. The book becomes thought-provoking when the mistress is killed in a car accident. It is during this climax that allows for a creative twist and also add to the flavor of the book. Without a strong creativity in climax, every book becomes bland. </p>
<p>Scientist today have used a creativity side to invent new things. For a long time in medicine, focus has been placed heavily on chemistry and trying to invent new medicine with the materials we have. When scientist become creative and start to look at exotic plants in Africa or even sharks, the medical research opens a new door for innovative idea. </p>
<p>The study of sharks in research is an innovative idea. With the imagination of researchers, looked into the cartilage and oil of sharks. The oil of sharks has evolved into a huge cancer research. With the imagination and creativity, research of shark/cancer research is made possible. </p>
<p>Because of creataivity, innovative ideas have become reality. If new ideas are not thought of, we would never have the luxury of new ideas. The father of modern science is a creative person. He visioned airplanes and other luxury we have today. If we were the uncreative, stubborn people who had imprisoned the father of modern science, we as the modern world would remain like ancient times.</p>