<p>Please help grade my SAT essay! I need advice and tips to improve my writing, thanks! Below here is what the essay will be about. </p>
<p>Prompt: No great man lives in vain. The history of the world is but the biography of great men. Adapted from Thomas Carlyle, “The Hero as Divinity”. In historic event, the so-called great men are labels giving names to events, and like labels they have but the smallest connection with the event itself.</p>
<p>Assignment: Can the daily actions of average people have a significant impact on the course of history? </p>
<p>If you are interested, please PM me and I send my essay to you. Thank you so much for your time and I will take any critiques and advice!</p>