<p>does this email sound fine? (i'm writing to admissions about my schedule change)</p>
<p>I apologize for giving such late notice, but there is a change in my second semester schedule not noted in my application. I switched from English 7-8 (H) to Literature/Composition due to schedule conflicts. Because most of my classes occur during certain periods and my fourth period (Advanced Journalism) is fixed, I was forced to choose between AP Government and English 7-8 (H). I chose AP Government because I believe it will be more useful in my college career.
Thank you for your time and consideration.</p>
<p>It looks OK, but I would suggest calling the school as well. UCLA is impossible to contact via telephone as it is, but I would imagine it being a lot worse with emails. You might have to wait 20minutes before talking to someone (like my mom and my friend), but I would feel a lot more comfortable hearing confirmation than taking a crap shoot and hoping that they reply with regards to your email.</p>