<p>I sent in the Common App awhile ago. Would it would be detrimental to my admission into a university if I sent in a revised version of that essay? Any feedback would be greatly appreciated.</p>
<p>hmm, this is tricky but i would probably call the admissions office first</p>
<p>I sent in a revised version with my transcripts to UNC Chapel Hill, and I was accepted there Early Notification.</p>