<p>So I rushed my editing of my commonapp essay for the 1/1 deadline and turned that version in. Then I fixed it a bit more (added in a few phrases, changed a few words) for a 1/2 deadline and I think it flows a lot better now.</p>
<p>I have half a mind to email the admissions offices and send them my new essay.</p>
<p>What do you guys think? Would it work? Am I just being neurotic? Any advice would do.</p>