<p>I wrote a supplement for my top choice (reach)...</p>
<p>I'd really appreciate some brutal crits, I really need the essay to be spot-on! </p>
<p>Bash it, pick it to pieces, I dont care lol</p>
<p>thanks! :)</p>
<p>I do peer critiques all the time, and I don’t play nice when it comes to my critiques, so I could give it a shot :3</p>
<p>bump 10char</p>
<p>bump 10 char</p>
<p>more than happy to help!</p>
<p>I’m home on a long break and bored. 
PM it my way.</p>
<p>bump, did some more edits :)</p>
<p>I’m bored, I feel vindictive, I’ll rip your essay to pieces. PM me.</p>
<p>i love critisizing,
pm me!</p>
<p>bump anyone else?</p>
<p>i would love to critique</p>
<p>I would love to smash it into smithereens!</p>
<p>im very picky, i will even tell u if a word is the wrong one to use, pm me!</p>
<p>I’ll GLADLY be critical.</p>