<p>Hi there! I'm willing to share my crappy essay for common app and the UCs.
I got into:
Tufts
UC Davis
UC San Diego
UC Berkeley
Boston University</p>
<p>Didn't get into:
NYU
Stanford</p>
<h2>UCLA</h2>
<p>What I did was basically recycle the essay i used on my UC app to privates.
It's not very good, but w/e I"m willing to share. Leave a message or PM me.
THanks</p>
<p>I’m unsure why you insist on its crappiness.It wasn’t Shakespeare, but it was more impactful than 90% of the essays I read on this site. Probably because you went in to specific detail about your mom’s situation and successfully played the pity card regarding your future job prospects.</p>