Short Answer Critique Needed

<p>I just spent 2 hours writing and rewriting my Common App short answer, and I still don't really know whether I'm approaching it the right way.</p>

<p>Anybody care to read it?</p>

<p>ill read it. PM me</p>

<p>Sorry, I forgot to add that I’d rather not send it to any 2010ers. It’s not really an essay that can be replicated, but I’m slightly paranoid nontheless.</p>

<p>I will read it. PM me.</p>

<p>Sorry loppyfoot, no 2010ers.</p>

<p>Anybody? It’s a quick read. I promise.</p>

<p>Sure. PM me.</p>

<p>sure. pm it over.</p>