Short Answer Critique

Applying to College Common and Coalition Application
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<p>Just finished my short answer; I wrote it about my experience in Youth Orchestra. Anybody willing to take a look at it?</p>

2

<p>I will. I am pretty good at editing, and I hope I can help you out. PM me. :)</p>

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<p>Alright, I’ll send it. Thanks!</p>