short essay reader needed, pretty please :-)

<p>so, i wrote an essay for nyu which i rather liked, but my mom says it's "horrible". can someone confirm or deny?</p>

<p>[it's due today]</p>

<p>i can read but as for editting i do not think i have time for that.</p>

<p>i can comment and if its short ...i think i could give a fair edit</p>