Short essay readers??

[stevenlee87]

<p>will anyone read/comment/revise my short essay?</p>

[hopeful219]

<p>sure . pee emmmm mee hahhaha</p>

[fire2006]

<p>sure PM me</p>

[superlyduper]

<p>ok ok</p>

[stevenlee87]

<p>sent to you all</p>

[harry7]

<p>I will take a look... pm me</p>