Short Essays - Need Proofreading & advice

College Essays
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<p>Its all in the title, tell me if i can send you my essays (there are 2, 300 words). It would be extremely appreciated, I took a gap year and I'm applying in September, so its URGENT rawr!</p>

2

<p>PM me. :) I'm class of '09, but I promise I won't steal 'em ( As if that'll convince you!)</p>

3

<p>PM me too :)</p>

4

<p>I'll read them PM me.</p>

5

<p>Sure PM me. I will take a look.</p>

6

<p>do send a PM good sir or maam.</p>

7

<p>sure, but don't take it offensively if we critique :)</p>

8

<p>Feel free to PM.</p>

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<p>Ok i made revisions and im going to be using it for a new topic for a different application so i need new critiques, thanks to everyone that has helped me so far, tell me if i can pm you my essay. Its only like 350 words. Thanks!</p>

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<p>Sure PM me ...</p>

<p>And if you wouldn't mind ... it would be "... everyone who has helped me ..." These are the simple yet ugly errors you should avoid at all costs!</p>

11

<p>bump.................</p>

12

<p>ill read them pm it</p>

13

<p>anyone else wanna critique them? and not just read them and never pm me back..</p>

14

<p>anyone else?</p>

15

<p>Shoot 'em over</p>

16

<p>Sure, I'll read it. PM me.</p>

17

<p>I'd like to read it. Honestly, I'm applying to colleges too and I wouldn't mind reading your essay. PM me if you want to read mine.</p>

18

<p>Unless you're applying to Stanford also, I'll read it.</p>