short extracurricular essay?

<p>it seems a bit rough to me.
Please comment below if you'd be willing to read it.
Thank you very much!</p>

<p>I’ll read it</p>

<p>I’m willing to critique your essay if you’re willing to critique mine. PM me :)</p>

<p>okay i m free now, feel free to send me your essays
Cheers!</p>