short one page waitlist supplement looking for some criticism and advice! :)

<p>would anyone who perhaps got into Columbia c/o 2013 or currently attending Columbia please take a look at my statement? i can guarantee it is very different from the normal waitlist statement or what i envision the usual statement to be. thank you so much! please comment or PM me.</p>

<p>I could take a look. Although I am not going to edit the paper for you, I will give you suggestions on how to improve the writing in terms of what Columbia is looking for. PM it to me.</p>

<p>i’ll look it over</p>

<p>Sure, send it over. I’ll give u what feedback I can :)</p>

<p>I’ll look it over; I’m an ED admit. PM It to me.</p>

<p>PM it to me and I’ll have a look and give you feedback and possible suggestions for improvement :)</p>