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Applying to College
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yea, i had posted this few weeks back, but i cant find that thread anymore. sending it in 2 days. so plz comment.

My senior year has definitely been the best year in high school so far. Academically, I have received the best grades in 4 years. As stated above, I earned 5 A’s and 2 B. However, the most encouraging fact is that I have done so well in AP level classes. These grades have assured me that I will do very well in college. My GPA has also boosted considerably due to my performance. I scored quite well on my SAT subject tests. I have registered about 40 hours of community service as a camp in guide at the Science Museum of Virginia since October. In retrospect, I am really proud of my accomplishments this year and I am very sure that I will be able to achieve such excellence in college as well.

also, i am expected to represent FBLA club for doing a website in perhaps districts or some sort of competition. should i put that in there?

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<p>My senior year has definitely been the best year in high school thus far. Academically, I have received the best grades in all 4 years of hs. As stated above, I earned 5 A’s along with 2 B's. However, the most surprising featof all is that I have done very well in AP level classes. These grades have reassured my senses that I will perform very well in college. My GPA has also risen considerably due to my strong academic performance. I scored quite well on my SAT subject tests. Since October, I have performed about 40 hours of community service as a camp in guide at the Science Museum of Virginia. In retrospect, I am really proud of my accomplishments thus far and I am very sure that I will be able to achieve such excellence in college and in the future.</p>

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<p>What is this for? What's the question? Be more specific. I would be careful about sending something like that to a college.</p>

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<p>it just says put any additional info you would like us to consider</p>

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<p>I think that you should add information regarding which AP courses you enjoyed and learned the most from. Giving a specific example of intellectual interest is a more powerful statement than saying you are 'doing well' - that can be deduced from your grades. </p>

<p>In addition, don't sound quite so surprised that you have done well in AP's. You could be pleased that you have met the challenge of this difficult work.</p>

<p>And...congratulations on the grades and good luck in April!</p>