<p>Hello!
I was just wondering if anybody would care to help peer-edit/condense my 540 word "short" response. I'm having a hard time condensing and would greatly appreciate it if somebody would read and offer a little insight. I can send whoever would do so an attached email.</p>
<p>This is for the Udub "short response" contribute to community of diversity essay.</p>
<p>Thanks everyone!</p>