<p>Hiya guys,
Well I feel as if I've done the best I can do on this essays with my limited ability but I wish there was someone that could seriously critique and shed additional light onto my essays so far. So Thanks for volunteering for reading my work. Although I probably will never see you in person, your help will be greatly appreciated!!</p>
<p>pss-i have a Cornell/brown/common essay im about to complete if you wanna read that XD</p>
<p>I believe emailing is the best way for the edit process so email me and I will send it off asap!!
GOOD LUCK EVERYONE!</p>