Sigh.. i thought i was done with this essay..

<p>Hi, </p>

<p>this is my very first post, just found the community online and needed some feedback/help/suggestions/miracles. </p>

<p>I've written an essay on diversity for the common app, if i can get any parents, professional writers, students attending university or just someone one with a good writing abilities to read my essay, i would be pretty grateful. </p>

<p>Any volunteers?</p>

<p>Sure! Just PM it, and I'll send any corrections/suggestions as soon as I'm done. :)</p>

<p>I will look at it.</p>