Silly vs. something serious vs. something in between for what matters essay

I’ve written rough drafts for 3 essays for the “What matters to you and why?” prompt.

  1. My silly one is about eyebrows. It was fun to write but it's sarcastic in some places and a little scattered.
    2.The serious one is about how books have helped me adapt to two different cultures. I've used a version of it previously for a diversity prompt and I'm worried it doesn't answer the prompt, except superficially.
  2. The one in between is also about books, but it's a lot more frivolous and idealistic. I don't like it as much, but imo it answers the prompt most clearly.

Thoughts, anyone?

I know it’s a super busy time but if anybody would be willing to read over semi-rough drafts of my essay, I would appreciate it.

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