Silverturtle Now Reading Essays

College Essays
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<p>Hello, everyone!</p>

<p>Over the last several months, I have received many requests to proofread/evaluate college essays. Because I was uncomfortable with advising other applicants when I was myself an applicant this admissions cycle who was working on essays, I had to turn down almost all of those requests. </p>

<p>I have some extra time now, however; and, not intending to write any more college essays, I am willing to read any essays that people want reviewed. I will focus on identifying ungrammaticality and mechanical errors, though I may comment on other things, time-permitting. </p>

<p>(To reiterate so that you are fully informed before you send your essay, I am a member of this year's high school graduating class.)</p>

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<p>I want you to read my essay silverturtle. Please.</p>

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<p>You can PM it.</p>

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<p>I am curious. How long will it take you? I don’t want to rush you. Take your time. I just want to know when i should log back in to see the revised version.</p>

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<p>Omg, you are a 2011 student? </p>

<p>Wow…good luck to you. Your posts here are amazing, always thought you were a parent</p>

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<p>where are you applying?</p>

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<p>PM sent silverturtle</p>

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<p>Another PM was sent to you silverturtle. In case you didn’t get it, i just asked you to rate my essay from 1 to 12?</p>

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<p>I will not be sending my essay to you, but I would like to thank you again for your contribution to College Confidential.</p>

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<p>I also want to Thank you and can’t wait to see you get into your first choice school.</p>

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<p>I also want to Thank you and can’t wait to see you get into your first choice school.</p>

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<p>Hi can you revise my essay and give comments for UT austin.
its only like 400 words
Thank you in advance</p>

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<p>Could you read over my personal statement? It’s about 600 or so words…</p>

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<p>Thank you silverturtle!! :)</p>

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<p>hey silverturtle. i sent you a pm with one of my personal statements. thanks a lot! hope u get a chance to read it</p>

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<p>hey i also pm’ed you</p>

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<p>Thanks a lot for looking over mine!</p>

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<p>Thanks bro</p>

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<p>I believe that I have finished all of the essays sent to me thus far. If you sent one but did not receive a reply yet, please resend it.</p>

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<p>I applied to Yale SCEA and the University of Illinois EA. Additionally, I will apply to Harvard RD. If I am rejected or deferred from Yale early, I will apply more widely, though.</p>

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<p>Thank you silverturtle for critiquing my essay! I would recommend your services to anyone.</p>