<p>I wrote a narrative about a certain day in Costa Rica when I was volunteering couple years ago.... It doesn't really come to a solid conclusion about how the trip changed me/what I learned (even thought I did)</p>
<p>I showed it to some people and one pointed out that I should include how the trip changed me.. So I tried to add in some parts, but now it seems so "cliche about volunteer essay"... Should I take his advice??? I think I might just write a whole new essay if that's the case. :(</p>