So I ended my essay with

<p>"...and if accepted, I’ll probably run around my block naked out of pure joy, hoping the whole neighborhood hears me yell: “TAKE THIS IN WHILE YOU CAN BECAUSE IT IS NOW THE PROPERTY OF CHICAGO!”"</p>

<p>mainly because the rest of the essay was absolutely boring.
I feel that I made the right choice.</p>

<p>this was the WhyChicago
I hope they enjoy boldness.</p>

<p>I probably wouldn’t have included the word naked… but even if you’re not accepted hopefully the admissions officers will be entertained for 3 seconds ;). I’m sure they’ll take whatever laughs they can get!</p>

<p>Whatever your essay was, it might have the most unique ending the add. officers read for the applicants for the class of 2015. i certainly was entertained :slight_smile:
but i agree with rainbow that you should have edited it a little. still no worries :smiley:
good luck</p>