<p>that could definitely use some feedback (:
I'm having my English teacher read it over and sit down with me to revise it next Monday, but I'd like some other people to read it for me too.
This is for ED to Cornell.
I'm also not sure which topic this is (common app) either.
& I'm also having trouble thinking of a good opening line =X
this is just insane right now xD
help is appreciated, thanks~ (:</p>
<p><a href="mailto:jflaks@sbcglobal.net">jflaks@sbcglobal.net</a></p>
<p>I don't mind, PM me.</p>
<p>disclaimer: I'm an 09er, but not applying to Cornell at all, and my essay's almost done.</p>
<p>thanks!
I've PM'ed both of you :)</p>
<p>haha I doubt anyone would want to copy my essay anyway xD</p>
<p>I'd love to help. Good luck with Cornell!</p>
<p>Sent!
Thank you!</p>
<p>send over !
hope i can help</p>
<p>I sent it over ! </p>
<p>XD
any little feedback is help to me =D</p>
<p>Send it I will read it.
Freshman at GW</p>
<p>i'd love to :]</p>
<p>Sent
thank you~~</p>
<p>heyy soph in college pm it over if u want - it may take me a couple of days to read it tho.</p>
<p>Adult college parent--but it will take me a couple of minutes to read it.</p>
<p>Sent ^^
& I don't mind how long it takes (:</p>
<p>I'd be glad to take a look. Send it over! :)</p>
<p>i'd like to take a look and give you feedback :)
send it over: <a href="mailto:teressilization@gmail.com">teressilization@gmail.com</a></p>
<p>I'll try my best. Send it. yo</p>
<p>If you are still looking for readers, I would be glad to help :)</p>