so I wrote an essay and I'm not sure if I did it right or not...

College Essays
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<p>i wrote one, but idk if it is what a college essay should be.
i feel like it needs something more</p>

<p>are any non-09ers willing to read and let me know if they think it works?</p>

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<p>bump
anyone?</p>

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<p>email me: <a href="mailto:srrinath@gmail.com">srrinath@gmail.com</a></p>

<p>not an 09er</p>