<p>Petepete28, it's not a good idea to post your commonapp essay. See the thread in "College Admissions" by sheeprun titled "Posting Essays and other Sensitive Information".</p>
<p>Petepete28, I just noticed that CC has a few threads relating to having other members review essays. There's a Consolidated List of Essay Readers and also a discussion of how to safely use advice from CC members without getting ripped off.</p>