So who wants to critique my essay!!!???

College Essays
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<p>Hey!
I've just finished my essay to get into the Governor's Scholar Program!!!Yay! So would anyone like to critique it??? It would be much appreciated!!!</p>

<p>Thanks so much! </p>

<p>Just pm me or leave a comment if you would like to read it.</p>

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<p>I'll take a look at it- I know a couple of people who got in and I can let them critique it also if you'd like. pm me</p>

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<p>Sent! thanks so much! Anyone else?!</p>

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<p>I know someone else would like to read it! Please!</p>