<p>I would appreciate someone looking over my essay and giving me some constructive criticism. It is a draft, and I know the end needs work.</p>
<p>It is intended to respond to "Topic of your choice"</p>
<p>Please PM me if you can put some time into it and give me some good feedback.</p>
<p>No 09'ers, please!</p>
<p>any takers?</p>
<p>bump bump</p>
<p>I am an 09er but I would be willing to swap essays with you if you don't mind. I need some critiquing on mine too. Help each other out</p>
<p>Hi blueducky!</p>
<p>I more than willing to read your essays ... on the condition that you're willing to read mine as well (that way we can discourage cheating and such). I am also looking for feedback for my essays, as I have finished writing them. </p>
<p>I would really appreciate it if we can exchange essays ... however, if you're not willing to because you don't trust me, I'll create a thread that slanders blueducky here on CC ... JUST KIDDING! I'll understand if you don't choose to send me your essays, because some CC posters are suspicious because they only send a simple sentence as a reply, such as "This essay is solid." I hate it when that happens because sometimes you have know idea whether they stole your essay or not.</p>
<p>I will say that it's hard to get non-09ers to read your essay, because most college students won't have the time to read your essay (this is based on personal experience) and pre-seniors don't know how to write personal statements.</p>
<p>If you pm me I will try to read it.</p>