<p>I would appreciate someone looking over my essay and giving me some constructive criticism. It is a draft, and I know the end needs work.</p>
<p>It is intended to respond to "Topic of your choice"</p>
<p>Please PM me if you can put some time into it and give me some good feedback.</p>
<p>No 09'ers, please!</p>
<p>any takers?</p>
<p>bump bump</p>
<p>I am an 09er but I would be willing to swap essays with you if you don’t mind. I need some critiquing on mine too. Help each other out</p>
<p>Hi blueducky!</p>
<p>I more than willing to read your essays … on the condition that you’re willing to read mine as well (that way we can discourage cheating and such). I am also looking for feedback for my essays, as I have finished writing them. </p>
<p>I would really appreciate it if we can exchange essays … however, if you’re not willing to because you don’t trust me, I’ll create a thread that slanders blueducky here on CC … JUST KIDDING! I’ll understand if you don’t choose to send me your essays, because some CC posters are suspicious because they only send a simple sentence as a reply, such as “This essay is solid.” I hate it when that happens because sometimes you have know idea whether they stole your essay or not.</p>
<p>I will say that it’s hard to get non-09ers to read your essay, because most college students won’t have the time to read your essay (this is based on personal experience) and pre-seniors don’t know how to write personal statements.</p>
<p>If you pm me I will try to read it.</p>