Some please read my extracurricular statement?

College Essays
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<p>Currently its about 11 words over the limit. Also I feel like I come off as too negative in it. </p>

<p>PM me if you don't mind reading it.</p>

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<p>Someone*******</p>

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<p>sure i can help yah cut it down if u like. PM it over</p>