Somebody please look at my essay

<p>I need help... I really don't like it, but I want to get into my college. I'll PM you for an email address.</p>

<p>ill give it a look... pm what school it is for, cause i don't wanna read it if it is for a school i am applying too ><</p>

<p>You already saw it. LOL. </p>

<p>It was about the Chinese people in the lab.....</p>

<p>ahh >< i was gonna say, looked familiar but i deleted you message in my inbox... lol</p>

<p>Ughhhhhhhhh.</p>

<p>sure i'll read it</p>

<p>Yay. People want to read. :D</p>

<p>I can read it. o_O</p>

<p>I can read, send me over.</p>