Somebody please read my essay!! (due in a few days)

<p>Hey guys, really need some help with my college essay, I have a initial draft in and could really use some suggestions.
I hate using the services of this community when I haven't really given anything back, so sorry in advance.
PM me if you would like to read it, I think I'll prob only send it to high post members.</p>

<p>ill read it pm me</p>

<p>sure, send it over</p>

<p>ill take a look</p>