Someone critique my UC essays?

<p>Yeah, I know I’m really last minute, the applications are due in less than 3 and a half hours.</p>

<p>That being said, I’d really appreciate if someone would spellcheck or give their opinion on my essays. I don’t want to be caught with some dumb mistake or error because I rushed it.</p>

<p>Thanks!</p>

<p>the prompts are:</p>

<li>Describe the world you come from- for example, your family, community, or school- and tell us how this world has shaped your dreams and aspirations.</li>
<li>Tell us abou a personal quality, talent, accomplishment, contribution, or experience that is important to you. What about this quality or accomplishment makes you proud and how does it reflect who you are?</li>
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