Someone edit my commonApp Essay on Tennis? What fun!

<p>A little bit long, but I think it's pretty good. I just need a fresh set of eyes to look it over.</p>

<p>Thanks</p>

<p>I'll be playing tennis next in college (i'm already in ED). I'd love to have a look!</p>

<p>lol i would love to see it~</p>

<p>I love tennis!! Let me read it and critique it...</p>