Someone please critique my Supplemental essay!

[tmsaurav]

<p>I'm an international student applying ED to a US college. Please respond here I'll PM my essay.</p>

[mpewangy]

<p>i’d like to do it.</p>

[tmsaurav]

<p>ok i’ll pm it to you.</p>

<p>anyone else?</p>

[Backtrack]

<p>PM it to me</p>