Someone please grade my Common App essay. Some say excellent, others trash!!

<p>Please read my essay and tell me what you feel. What does it tell you about me?</p>

<p>ok, I sent it to you</p>

<p>I’ll read it :)</p>

<p>Thanks Guys!!
And yeah, please be honest!</p>

<p>I’ll read it too if you like :D</p>

<p>I’ll read it if you want :)</p>

<p>Its funny, I opened CC and found 2 PMs, one said its excellent, while the other said I should rewrite it completely. Once again, I have no idea who to believe!</p>

<p>The thing is I have already submitted it to most of my universities. But if its actually as bad as some people say it is, I would definitely want to change it. I really don’t know what to do.</p>

<p>PM me. I would love to read it. :)</p>

<p>Dear CCer,
I hope you are well. So if any one is interested to read my essay please let me know.
Before doing so, if you do not have any problem with LGBT issues I guess it might not be a good idea to read mine.
Another problem is I am applying to WCMCQ. So the fact related to my sexual orientation is hidden but the mental challenge was tough and significantly affected my academic performance. I have to struggle to maintain a standard. I have to hide it because of cultural issue and I myself dont want to make it an issue for the next few years of my life. I have no other choice because the 6 years program of Cornell in only offered there and since I know I am committed to study medicine I want to try for that. In the US hardly any institution takes international med student in t 6 years program. My SAT scores are not high. I suffer a lot from GAD and it was recently diagnosed. I am planning to visit a doc for meds.<br>
I wish to know your opinion about my essay.</p>

<p>i’ll read it.</p>