Someone please help read and correct my essay

So I finally finish my college essay. The topic is very broad, asking to me to write my skills and why I should be accepted into their school. I need someone to rate my essay and fix any grammar mistakes, make my essay stronger, so far no one read my essay yet. I am looking for at least three experienced people to read it and fix any mistakes. Appreciate the help, pls comment if you good at writing or grammar, I’ll pm u my essay. Thanks for help everyone.

I’m not a professional but I’ll check it out.