Someone please read my final common app essay before I submit it!

[ryan02190]

<p>I would appreciate <em>any</em> type of criticism, correction, etc. :) </p>

[bomerr]

<p>pm me </p>

[jkman101]

<p>i’ll proof read, pm me if its not too late. </p>

[Aaly222]

<p>I will too PM me</p>

[thekoolkid]

<p>sure, PM me</p>