Someone read my essay? And what is a good rating from a teacher rec.?

<p>I would prefer it if someone older than me were to read the essay. Last week, I decided to rewrite the entire thing with a new idea, so its a pretty rough draft. Please be VERY critical, I would really appreciate it.</p>

<p>Also, I was able to peak over at the teacher's desk for my rec letter and I saw the check boxes for the Teacher Evaluation. I got the majority in "Top 5%" and a couple in "Top few in my career." Is this average? Do i need better?</p>

<p>the checks in the table dont matter past a certain point. For instance it is nice to get a 2400, but a 2200 will more than suffice assuming you have the same killer app. Its nice to get one of the fews for all, but as long as your in the ball park top 5-10, maybe 1 few, then you have that part taken care of and what will make you or break you is the personal differentiators. The written content. Emotion, support, confidence, pride, amazement... its not conveyed through checks in certain percentages.</p>