<p>I don't think this would be considered the 'best' of what I can write...but it's okay for now. I think it's just something to me get started for this whole essay writing process and I just don't think it's near its full potential so I was wondering if anyone could read this over and help me out a bit..?</p>
<p>Eh and I'm also thinking my beginning and end don't tie in very well either so any advice would be great. Thanks!</p>
<p>I just went through the admissions process last year, and I'd be glad to offer my assistance. And don't worry if it's not perfect yet. It's great that you're starting so early so that you'll have plenty of time to write and revise.</p>
<p>I went through the admissions process. I'd definitely be willing to help you ou so it can reach it's full potential. =]</p>
<p>yeah i will read it <a href="mailto:dude83190@aol.com">dude83190@aol.com</a> or post message me</p>
<p>I would like to read it hommie G, brother boss man. Anyways, that is if you don't mind.</p>