Would anyone be willing to read and help edit my rough draft of a letter of appeal?
There are many threads about this, so do a search first. You will find good advice. Look for keywords such as academic dismissal, and letter of appeal, or appealing academic suspension. Post your letter here after you have done a little research. You will get more responses that way.
The poster’s name is 2020 so are you hoping to be in the class of 2020 for college? are you appealing and admissions decision?
@booper yes I’m looking to appeal an admission decision. I have already done my research and would like someone to privately look at it and give me an outside opinion
Perhaps you know this already: most colleges don’t consider appeals unless it’s clearly a mistake such as a transcript reporting error or something.
I think your time and energy would be better spent focusing on the schools you have been admitted to and choosing the best option from those. From what I see on another thread you do have some very nice options.