<p>can someone please read my uc essay
i think its too long and i need to figure out what i can cut so it will still make sense</p>
<p>ill email it to you so please reply!!!
i need really critical criticism!</p>
<p>can someone please read my uc essay
i think its too long and i need to figure out what i can cut so it will still make sense</p>
<p>ill email it to you so please reply!!!
i need really critical criticism!</p>