<p>So I wasn't satisfied with my short answer before so I rewrote another one. I'd like someone to read it and critique it for me. And if possible, to shorten it because it's supposed to be 150 words and I'm at 154 right now. Thanks.</p>
<p>So I wasn't satisfied with my short answer before so I rewrote another one. I'd like someone to read it and critique it for me. And if possible, to shorten it because it's supposed to be 150 words and I'm at 154 right now. Thanks.</p>